Score: 0

"boring"

submission: SuperSmashBrosBrawl Part1

date: November 8, 2009

i dont even know where to begin....

ok so the animation is terrible. i honestly dont know why you would make this in ms paint when you could have made this in flash.

secondly, there are really know good jokes in here. you pretty much just recycle 3 jokes over and over: the "youre a dick" type joke, "all the characters are wusses", and one of your favorites seems to be "i want them to fuck me". honestly, there is no good humor in this.

and i know that im supposed to write some constructive criticism, but youve got youre work cut out for you if you want this to be good. heres my suggestions: learn to use flash and animate it in that, and come up with better ideas for this animation. im not saying something completely different, you could easily do something making fun of Brawl and have it be good, but none of the gags youre using right now are very good. theyre really just kinda distateful and lame. its like middle school level humor. plz change

Score: 3

"longer"

submission: Like A Boss: Flash

date: November 8, 2009

this honestly needed to be longer. i feel like if you didnt use all your best joke ideas in there and that you could have done so much more with this. it was just way too short for me really. also, i noticed another reviewer down there saying that the audio was off for them by about a second, which happened to me too, until i refreshed it. i wasnt going to say anything about that until i saw it was an issue for someone else, so you might want to check to see what the problem with that might be (just in case).

if you just extend this a bit longer i think it could be really funny. its a great idea, and i really like the animation. it really works and is really smooth, so good job on that front :D

Score: 4

"what?"

submission: Ridicules Of Chronic.TZR

date: November 8, 2009

my main issue with this is that i cant understand it, and not because of the accents either. the sound quality itself is just really poor. my recommendation would be to either get some better recording equipment, or, if spending a bunch of money isnt much of an option, add subtitles. either one of those would make this a lot more understandable.

also, i get that its your first flash and all, but please wait to post more of this series until you have at least a full episode instead of one scene. its really not much to judge at all.