i dont even know where to begin....
ok so the animation is terrible. i honestly dont know why you would make this in ms paint when you could have made this in flash.
secondly, there are really know good jokes in here. you pretty much just recycle 3 jokes over and over: the "youre a dick" type joke, "all the characters are wusses", and one of your favorites seems to be "i want them to fuck me". honestly, there is no good humor in this.
and i know that im supposed to write some constructive criticism, but youve got youre work cut out for you if you want this to be good. heres my suggestions: learn to use flash and animate it in that, and come up with better ideas for this animation. im not saying something completely different, you could easily do something making fun of Brawl and have it be good, but none of the gags youre using right now are very good. theyre really just kinda distateful and lame. its like middle school level humor. plz change
this honestly needed to be longer. i feel like if you didnt use all your best joke ideas in there and that you could have done so much more with this. it was just way too short for me really. also, i noticed another reviewer down there saying that the audio was off for them by about a second, which happened to me too, until i refreshed it. i wasnt going to say anything about that until i saw it was an issue for someone else, so you might want to check to see what the problem with that might be (just in case).
if you just extend this a bit longer i think it could be really funny. its a great idea, and i really like the animation. it really works and is really smooth, so good job on that front :D
will i still get milk n tukkies n that?
my main issue with this is that i cant understand it, and not because of the accents either. the sound quality itself is just really poor. my recommendation would be to either get some better recording equipment, or, if spending a bunch of money isnt much of an option, add subtitles. either one of those would make this a lot more understandable.
also, i get that its your first flash and all, but please wait to post more of this series until you have at least a full episode instead of one scene. its really not much to judge at all.
The game definitely is a really fun and chill game, and has great music to boot. I only have one question. What's the song playing in the menu? it doesn't seem to be any of the NG songs you listed here on the side. Love this game tho :]
Thanks! All the music can be found under the bonus section, I will update the side here though
Good, but slight glitch encountered
Overall, I really liked this game, despite it's relative simplicity (not too difficult puzzles really). I didn't play to the end, but only because I encountered a glitch and because I have class in about 10 minutes. The glitch i found was that sometimes it would not register I was moving, and then all of a sudden, it would move me for a ways while I wasn't pressing anything (not teleporting, just acting as if I were pressing a key to move). I do understand the short time frame you had to complete this in though, and otherwise, it was a great game and really fun! Good work! :)
It's a great game, and really reminded me a lot of Braid. The puzzles were great, and overall I really liked it.
My only complaint is that the jump controls seemed a bit too sensitive, so that sometimes when you jumped, as soon as you landed, you jumped again, which made some of the levels that required very precisely timed jumps much more difficult than I think they were intended to be.
It might be a problem of the Flash player you have installed (some old flash vertions have problems with this game controls detection).
Also the game (on proupose) detects if you press jump right before landing and if you do make another jump (makes the game smoother).
Thanks for your review!
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