Ridicules Of Chronic.TZR what?
my main issue with this is that i cant understand it, and not because of the accents either. the sound quality itself is just really poor. my recommendation would be to either get some better recording equipment, or, if spending a bunch of money isnt much of an option, add subtitles. either one of those would make this a lot more understandable.
also, i get that its your first flash and all, but please wait to post more of this series until you have at least a full episode instead of one scene. its really not much to judge at all.